大学四级英语写作最后一段怎么总结才精彩

大学四级英语写作最后一段怎么总结才精彩

　　③ 炫耀 Third, only a private car can show a persons social status/ achievement/ success/ prosperity in his or her career.

　　否定段的主题句：① However , there are some disadvantages of owing a private car/ Every coin has two sides.

　　② While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us, we should not ignore the problem they create/ produce/ introduce/ make.

　　③ Despite/ In spite of/ For all the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/ problems/ negative effects

　　④ Like anything else, private cars also have their own weakness/ limits.

　　⑤ However, private cars are not without shortcomings/ faults.

　　⑥ Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought. They complain that......

　　⑦ However, private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced.

　　⑧ Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences.

　　否定段的分论点：

　　① 占有空间 On the one hand, private cars take up/ occupy too much space.

　　② 交通事故 On the other hand, a driver should be careful/ cautious while driving, otherwise, car accidents are more likely to happen.